文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Pen Pal Wanted Hello, Lucy King, 13, comes from the UK, her favorite hobbies are sports, music and movies. Now Lucy wants to make a Chinese pen pal friend because she bloody loves China and knows more about it. She wants to be found a Chinese girl who is the same as Lucy's hobbies, and studying Chinese from pen pal friend.