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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2873
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少。

用户练习作文:

From the information table given above, five reasons list on table from drivers turning left,diver traveling too close to other vehicles,pedestrians crossing roads carelessly,divers driving under the influence of alcohol and drivers failing to give a signal. Conclusion the accident 2004 to 2005, the percent of one year was increase rate and a little decrease. The first kind of accident was increased 10%,second kind of accident was increased 9%,and other is about 12%,15% and -5%. China is a power nowadays, Social flourishing and the regime spared out treasure in the people. Thus,We could buy our own private cars that is the major reason to cause these accident. By the more and more private cars run on road,We could find that is not a good way for instead of walking.

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