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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17702
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

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and the anti slavery movement and the civil war before the other progressive movement together, despite the creation of the "Little Women" coincided with the authority of the United States first period, the development of women's personality is severely constrained. But the Alcott does not think women are men's accessories, she hoped that through the creation of novel arouse a woman awakening, encourage women in life to show individuality and freedom. "Little Women" in the image of women have their own ideal and faith: MEG is Marge's eldest daughter, to assume the responsibility to help the mother to take care of the family; Joe after efforts eventually became a writer, she is in the novel the most typical feminist novel, abandon the women should be some traits, its behavior and personal preference and the traditional on of women's interpretation of the opposite, and Beth have beautiful music and dream; when Amy dream world outstanding artists, marriage is not like traditional women as the family as their all, but continued to pursue his dream of art. [1] this fully reflects the Alcott's four sisters seeking self-reliance independent female

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