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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17702
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;能较准确地使用高级词汇,词汇运用灵活。

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The anti slavery movement and the civil war before the other progressive movement , despite the creation of the "Little Women" coincided with the authority of the United States first period, the development of women's personality is severely constrained. However, the Alcott does not think women are men's accessories, she has hoped that the creation of novel would arouse a woman awakening, encouraging women of life to show individuality and freedom. "Little Women" in the image of women have their own dream and faith: Meg is Marge's eldest daughter, and she assumes the responsibility to help the mother to take care of the family; Joe eventually became a writer in her every effort, she is the most typical feminist in in the novel, abandoning the women would be some traits, its behavior and personal preference and the tradition of women's interpretation of the opposition, and Beth have beautiful music and dreams; when Amy dreams to be the world's outstanding artists,while marriage is not like traditional women as the family as all, but continuing to pursue herdream of art. [1] This has fully reflected the Alcott's four sisters has seeked self-reliant independent female.

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