文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Tom is a student Usually, he get up at 6:00 in morning. Then brash teeth and wash face. After that, he go to school at 6:15. He have breakfast outside on his way to school. Class start on 8:30 till to 12:00. Class over, he go home and do homework. He don't listen to music on school days and watch TV on school nights expect weekends. He often go bed at 9:20 in the evening.