七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning and then he rode a bike to the park.He had a good time in the park.At noon he had lunch with his father in the McDonald's .Sam played basketball with his classmates in the school till six o'clock. After dinner,Sam and his father went for a walk.His father bought a classical music CD for him. What a funny day Sam has enjoyed!