作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
The behavior of civilization become more and more important now in the world,which is not only important in the comunication with the person beside you but all the world. However,many people haven't realised the importance of it.Some people drop the litter everywhere though the trash is just next them!Some smoke in the public.What's more,some spit,talk in the public places. I think it is high time to give up this bad behavior.Government should take measures to forbbit these behavior and also people ought to be behave well.