小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is Kelly.shs is 15 years old,she is a girl , she like playing computer,reading book planting and drawing.She broed with playing basketball or football.She is a pleasent girl,she is very friendly and she is kind to others so she always make an good impression on her friend.My frist impression of her was favourable .she is a good girl, is she.