七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；作者使用词汇表达不够灵活，需要多使用一些高级词汇；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Sam got up at 6:00 yesterday. After that, he rode a bike to the park. He was funny playing in the park. At noon he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played basketbal with his classmates from 4pm to 6pm, he was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father who bought a classical CD for him. Sam very happy, because he enjoys music very much. What an interesting day Sam did.