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Sam got up at 6 AM in yesterday, then ride bicycle to park. He have a good time in park. Had lunch at MC with parents. Sam and her classmate play baskball at school from 4 pm to six pm. after dinner sam and he farther go for a walk together .Farther brought a classicl music CD for he,,How a great day !!