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Our Monitor We have a nice monitor.Our monitor is a girl .Her name is Wang Xiaohong.She is thirteen years old.Sha has got long hair and two big eyes.She has a small nose and a small mouth.She is very beautiful.She likes wearing red clothers.She thinks red is very beautiful.Wa all like her.