正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Our Monitor We have a nice monitor. Our monitor is a girl. Her name is Wang Xiaohong. She is thirteen years old. Sha has got long hair and two big eyes. She has a small nose and a small mouth. She is very beautiful. She likes wearing red clothes. She thinks red is very beautiful. We all like her.