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I have known about the jims for five years.Jim is my best friend. Jim's father is a professor teaching in a local college.Jim's mother is a nurse working in the centre hospital.Jim's sister is younger than me.She is a sweet girl who likes to paint. Jim and I have the same habbit,we both like to play football.