七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句过少；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam set up at 6:00 tomorrow.then rad bake went park, he played very happy in park.in noon with his perantce to eat .Sam with his friend play basketball in school at afternoon .for 4:00 until 6:00.after dinner he with his father went for a walk ,father buy a raciol CD for he. the day is very happy.