但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Sam waked up at six yesterday. Then he got to the park by bike. He was enjoyed in the park. Sam had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. Afternoo, Sam and his classmates played baskedball in school from 4 pm to 6 pm. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical for him. What an interesting day it was!