七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句过少；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Yesterday sam got uo at six. After ate breakfast, he rode bike to the park. He had a good time in the park. In the noon, he with his parents went Mcdonald's had lunch. Afternoon sam with his classmates played basketball in the school till the six. After dinner, sam with his father went for a walk, his father bought him classical music CD. What did sam have this interesting day.