小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Look at this picture! This is my grandfather who has a slightly smile in the picture. He is already seventy years old, but he is still strong and independent. He was a math professor in a college. He is famous for his style of humorous. Many students choose his classes at the beginning of each term. He not only works hard but also lives vividly. During his retire days, he prefers to go hiking and fishing outside rather than stay at home. And he was fond of cooking. All dishes made by grandpa are extremely delicious. Each of us likes it very much.