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Yesterday sam got up at six. After ate breakfast, he drove bike to the park. He had a good time in the park. At noon, he with his parents went Mcdonald's had lunch. In the Afternoon sam with his classmates played basketball in the school till the six. After dinner, sam with his father went for a walk, his father bought him classical music CD. What did sam have this interesting day.