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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. After that, he rode his bike to the park. He had great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonld's with his parents. In the afternoon. Sam played basketball from 4p.m. till 6p.m. with his pupils. It was relaxing. After dinner, sam went for a walk with his dad. His dad bought him a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoyed music very much. What a happy day sam had!
