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I joined a summer camp in this summer vacation. Every day we got up in six o clock, then ran one hour. We had thiry minutes for breakfast. At 8:00, three were kinds of classes. At 10:00 O clock, we joined to play game, such as basketball, rope skipping. We usually had lunch from 11:30 to 12:00. Then, we had two hour to relax or sleep. At the afternoon, we needed do some labour. After that excercise, I become more strength and patient. I like such movements.