单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Tom has many rules.For example,He must get up at 6:00 every morning.He must go to school at 6:15.He can't eat outside.He can't listen to music on school days.He can't watch TV on school nights.He must be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening and so on.