文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,注意文中少数拼写错误;句法欠规范,多多加强从句的练习;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
sam get up at six o'clock yesterday .then he go to park by bike and have fun.he have lunch with his parents at McDonald's .in the afternoon he play basketball with his classmate at the school from 4pm to 6pm .after eat dinner ,sam go for a walk with his father ,his father buy a classic CD for he.the day is intersting for sam.