作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning.he rode his bike to the park.he had great fun playing in the park.at noon ,He had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents .In the afternoon,he played basketball from 4pm to 6pm with his classmate at the schoool .After dinner,he go for a walk with his father ,and his father bought a classical CD for him.he was very happy.what a happy day Sam had;