小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加从句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

A picture is on my desk. This is a picture of Jim's family.Jim's family live in the wilds of Alaska.JIm is a student.Jim's mother is a teacher who teach student about wild flowers and animals.Jim's father practice as a doctor,he usually communicate with the patients so that he can learn about the patients.