小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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When I grow up,I want to be a very kind women,I will help more and more students to get the hang of studing and cross my heart,I will help the poor people wo lives in the wilds.Next,I will make friends with many people.I will hang out with my friend when I am free.That's all.