小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

When I grow up,I want to be a very kind woman,I will help more and more students to get the hang of studying and cross my heart,I will help the poor people who lives in the wilds.Next,I will make friends with many people.I will hang out with my friend when I am free.That's all.