小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

When I grow up, I hope to become a doctor. The doctor can save life who has been ill. Now many persons are dead for some strange disease. Face to these disease, the doctors do not look for any good solutions. When I grow up, I will become a famous doctor. I will invent some medicine. This medicine will be used to patients. Then they will be healthy. The people can be more healthy , because they will do not get sick.