文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam got up at 6 o’clock tomorrow. Then went to the park by bicycle. He was very happy in park. He has lunch in McDoald’s with his parents. Sam played basketball at 4pm until 6 o’clock. at school with classmate. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classical for him. The day was very interest.