但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Sam got up at 6 o’clock tomorrow. Then went to the park by bicycle. He was very happy in park. He has lunch in McDoald’s with his parents. Sam played basketball at 4pm until 6 o’clock at school with classmate. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, and his father bought a classical for him. The day was very interest.