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It is useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. There is a big ralationship between learning habit and learning effort. In my experience, a good learning habit is review in time. For example, if you study a article, you will review promptly. Otherwise, you will forget it. I have a bad habit in English study, I study quickly and forget it quickly. So I remind myself that I will review it after studying. By then, I overcome it completely.