从句使用不熟练;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
Abstract Many people doesn't like their word. They thought the job dull and boring. What is the reason? Firstly, people do not enjoy the job they are doing. Secondly, they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much large one. In my opinion, commom job is necessary to the society. For example, cleaning streets is hardly, the cleaner works in the wind and rain. If without cleaner, the enviroment will bad, the rubbish lay everywhere. Maybe the common word is dull and boring, but it is useful. I will work hard in my job.