初一英语作文模拟题:夏令营

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my summer camp in this summer holiday ,i joined a summer camp for two days . there were forty - five children in the summer camp .we went to a small village, there is a small river in the village . we lived in a big grass house , it is very beautiful . first day , we visited a farm . the farmer is very kind , he taught us how to fed chickens . in the end , he gave us many eggs . last day , we went fishing . this summer camp was really fun.