作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. Then he went to the park by bike. He had a good time in the park. At noon and parents eat lunch at McDonald's. Sam and his classmates play basketball at school in the afternoon, from four pm until six pm. After dinner, Sam and his father stroll, his father bought him a classical music CD. How interesting the day is Sam!