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The supporters think that the car is a convenient, fast and comfortable transportation tool which supports better service and saves human's time. Other way, the demand for more and more cars shows the development of the country, people are rich now. Of course, many other industries are grew because of it, such as transport, gas, plastic. But the others are afraid that the car would bring too many problems at the same time. For example, the more cars, the more tail gas, the more heavy traffic, the less parking place. The air is worst than before.