文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累高级词汇;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
English is an important foreign language. All over the world people can communication in it. We study English let us more knowledge and more clever. We can improve our English level in there steps. Firstly, we will spent more time in English. Secondly, we should enhance our efficient. Thirdly, we should use English in our life.