不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;采用了一些简单的从句;请增加词汇量的积累,并仔细检查词汇的拼写。
As we all kown,English is an world wide spoken language. Today,more and more peaple have realized that English plays an important role in their life and work. therefor, it is very important to learn English well. In order to improve the lever of our English,I think we can take the following measures.Firstly, we should have an strong intrest on English studying.Secondly, during our daily life, I think the more practise, the better our English studing efect will be.Tirdly, we can enjoy English movie and TV play.