2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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firstly,i am very happy that you will come into china,there have many beatuiful places.my hometown is in the chongqin.it is a most papular place for a vication.for eexample,the one was named sanxia with great view and make people fell relax.thiis is a good place to help you fell the beatuiful of nutural .