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my name is Lucy King. I am from UK, I am a student, I have many favorites , such as sports ,music , movies. I am very interesting at china, So i want to know too much about chinese culture,I want to make a chinese friend , I hope that she is a girl and she has same favorites with me,I can learn chinese from her,If you meet these requirement , Please contact me by mail .