作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文中从句过少;语言不流畅。
Sam get up at 6 o`clock yesterday. He went to the Park by bike and he had a good time in the park. At noon, He had lunch with his parents in McDonald`s. He played basketball with his classmates from 4pm to 6pm. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought him a classical music CD. What an interesting day did Sam have.