不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
Hello my first name is Lucy.My last name is King.I is therteey years old.I from The UK.My language is English.I like sports,listen to music and watch movies.I want to find a Chiese penfriend.because I like Chiese very much.Iwant to know dbout Chiese.I hope she is a girl.Ialso hope to she study me Chiese.