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Hello my first name is Lucy. My last name is King. I am 13 years old. I'm from The UK. My language is English. I like to sports, listen to music and watch movies. I want to have a Chiese penfriend. Because I like Chiese very much. I want to know about Chiese. I hope she is a girl. I also hope to she teachs me Chiese.