正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;衔接成分偏少。
Our Monitor My monitor is a girl. Her name is Xumeng. We are good friends. Shi is 12 years old. I think she is very nice. First,she has a big eye. Second,she has a small mouth. Her hair is black and long. She like in a pink cloths. My teacher like she is very much.Me,too.