正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Our Monitor My monitor is a girl. Her name is Xumeng. We are good friends. Shi is 12 years old. I think she is very nice. First,she has a big eye. Second,she has a small mouth. Her hair is black and long. She likes in a pink clothes. My teacher like she is very much.Me,too.