可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam wake up at six AM. yesterday.Than he had fun in the park.At the noon, he had lunch with his parents in the McDonald's .In the afternoon,he play the basketball with other sduents untill 6PM. After the supper,Sam go for a walk with his father and his father give a CD to him.It's a fuuny day!