小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

My father is a teacher. He is very busy. He has taught lots of person. Some of them have made great achievement. So I am proud of my father. My father always gets up very early from Monday to Friday. Then he goes out and execrises. After he had breakfast at home, he went to school. Sometime he went home very late. because he taught some students who were poor porformance. When they had made progress, he was exciting. Some students appriciated to his help. After my father went home, he corrected homework till night. I like my fahter.