小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

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My father is a teacher. He is very busy. He has taught a lot of person. Some of them have made a great achievement. So I am proud of my father. My father always gets up very early from Monday to Friday. Then he goes out and exercises. After he had breakfast at home, he went to school. Sometime he went home very late, because he taught some students who were poor performance. When they had made progress, he was excited. Some students thanked to his help. After my father went home, he corrected homework till night. I like my father.