小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用。

my good friends is name su lele./she has long curly hair.she is not very tall.her eyes is very beatutiful.it is like the start in the sky.she is very hospitable to the people.she likes see the cartoons.sometimes he likes to play qq game. i always find her to talk.i think it very comfertable. she talks a lot.i like her very much.