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Everyone has his own favorite sports. My favorite sport is football. I fall in love with football by chance. Once I picked a football on my way home, I was curious about it. Then played it with my friends. From then on I always raced football with my friends after school to improve our football skills. My favorite football star is Beckham, who is good at football. And my dream is to become a professional football player.