小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用。

Lele is one of my good friends.she is short .she has small black eyes.it likes start in thesky.she has long curly black hair.she likes playing games,watching the cartoon,and communcaite with peson.i like chat with her.i ragard as a nice thing for me.she is not very perfect,but i like her vert much.