2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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Everybody should learn to smile.because Smile is a good way to encourage ourselves,and it will bring us confidence.Smiling When we communicate with others,all the people can get along well. Also,smile is that medicine of friendship make everyone who you talk happy. How wonderful Smile is! I hope everyone can smile everyday.